Talk:Colony

You may want to add a related article section. BPL 21:52, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Really nice story! BPL 01:30, 4 February 2009 (UTC)

You think it's not boring? Thanks! Red Raptor 19:17, 11 February 2009 (UTC)

Are you aware that an IP edited your story? BPL 23:28, 13 February 2009 (UTC)

That was me, but I forgot to Log In. Silly me. Red Raptor 05:53, 14 February 2009 (UTC)

I actually really liked loved this! BPL 16:50, 14 February 2009 (UTC)

I like it!--Windu223 01:26, 21 February 2009 (UTC)

Thank you both for kind words! Red Raptor 05:32, 21 February 2009 (UTC)

What do you think?
So, do you think that the story is getting a little boring and drag nowadays? I want to finish this and start writing something else, but the problem is that I have the basic story, but I can't write any of the dialog, I just suck at writing about emotions. Red Raptor 09:25, 15 April 2009 (UTC)


 * That's what I thought about Nightwing, but somehow, after two years, I managed to pull it off. BPL  22:51, 15 April 2009 (UTC)

Shortened?
You shortened it? Why?! Can you change it back? It was better. BPL 22:14, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

Well, I just wanted to see what you thought, but if you say, I will return the longer version. Red Raptor 05:38, 17 April 2009 (UTC)

Good job! BPL 19:42, 17 April 2009 (UTC)